Say What?

In light of the issues presented by United States v. Jones, questioning the technological ability of the government to track movement through GPS, not to mention through cellphones, and the ubiquity of video cameras, the word “Orwellian” has become a mainstay of much discussion, and many court decisions.  While listening to oral argument in Jones, Orin Kerr  counted 5 references to Orwell’s 1984.

But as Marc DiGirolami notes, Big Brother’s ability to see and hear people at all times wasn’t the point.


I don’t believe that the term “Orwellian,” assuming it is used as a reference to 1984, is principally about government monitoring of private citizens.  It’s true that Winston Smith has to deal with the telescreen at home, and that there are hidden microphones everywhere to allow the government to spy.  I understand the allusion.  But I believe it to miss the point.

I agree. Government monitoring was a trapping, a backdrop to the point Orwell was trying to make. Government was allowed to take advantage of its populace because of his core concern, and the focus on the trappings rather than the root of the problem now is, frankly, pretty disturbing.  This is why things went so horribly wrong in 1984, and our attention to the symptoms without recognizing the disease suggests that we’re headed in the same direction.
The real aim of this monitoring has to do with knowing and controlling what is in people’s minds, not only to prevent “thoughtcrime” from occurring but to eradicate the possibility of thoughtcrime altogether (this is the upshot of Smith’s experience in the Ministry of Love (Miniluv), where he comes to “love” Big Brother after a series of physical and mental tortures, culminating in Room 101).  The point is not merely, or even primarily, about watching people.  It is about controlling their minds and compelling abject adoration by dominating their thoughts.

Orwell was focused on language, not technology.  Newspeak.


Even more than this, 1984 is about the inexorable degradation of language by its close association with the state (“political” writing was not Orwell’s favorite).  I am not the first to believe that if the book were written today, its target might not have been the state, but linguistic degeneration through the influence of biz-speak or tech-speak, consultant-speak and text-speak. 

The appendix to 1984 is a discussion of how it is that language can be deliberately simplified and boiled down, and that it was perceived to be the great advance of Newspeak that, unlike all languages before it, it was continually shrinking.  Linguistic style, its complication and variety, is connected with human individuality and uniqueness of thought.  It is the aim of the state in 1984 to crush that individuality by removing all shades of meaning, all nuance, all manner of degree and particular flavor in vocabulary.  By this systematic linguistic impoverishment, people become more docile, as single and ever-contracting words come to signify two opposite meanings (doublethink).

By eliminating that aspect of language that allows people to adequately think about and communicate subversive ideas, Big Brother was able to eliminate the underlying ideas, which in turn allowed the domination of thought.

Marc’s point, that the degradation of language is happening all around us, and largely led not by government but by “biz-speak or tech-speak, consultant-speak and text-speak,” really strikes home.  Spend any time reading the crap that passes as content on the internet and, if you’re still capable, give just a bit of thought to the meaning of the words.  What we find with unacceptable frequency are strings of words that convey vague impressions with utterly no discernable meaning. 

This phenomenon isn’t limited to mommy blogs or tin-foil hat societies, but lawyers and law firms whose marketing copy reflects a wholesale absence of actual thought.  It’s become common in court decisions where rhetorical gymnastics are substituted for definitions and rationales. 

Indeed, in  the discussion of #Occupy Wall Street’s purpose, what’s become sadly clear is that people will cling to vague slogans, platitudes and notions that convey the impression of meaning when there’s nothing there.  Everyone can take their own personal comfort in the movement’s purpose, without having any capacity to know whether anyone else in the movement actually agrees with them or shares that purpose.  We embrace vaguely inspirational expressions, and don’t seem to realize that they don’t actually say anything.

And yes, it’s become a staple of political rhetoric, from the absurd acronyms used to warm us to overreaching laws (USA PATRIOT Act) to the acceptability of having TSA protectors insert their fingers into women’s vaginas “for our own protection.”

DiGirolami takes the argument one step beyond where I would, however, when he asserts:


“Orwellian” is an apt description of the new orthodoxy of “simple,” “plain,” “direct” written expression that passes under the Newspeaky term, “good writing,” or in legal circles, “effective legal writing.”  The next time somebody insists that you ought not use a word because it is too ornate, difficult, antique, complex, or unfamiliar, tell them that they are being Orwellian. 

The point Orwell made was that language needs to satisfy the ability to think and convey specific and nuanced meaning.  This doesn’t mean that it’s somehow more intellectual to use more complicated, prolix or faux sophisticated language when a simple, plain or direct word does the job.  The point of communication is to communicate, not show how many fancy words are in your repertoire.

Of course, when a particular word, even one rarely used and whose definition was forgotten immediately after taking the SATs, is the one that expresses precisely what you mean to say, then that’s the word to use. The idea is that we need to keep all the words in our arsenal available, as we can’t afford to lose the ability to express any idea, but, like force, use them only when needed and justified.

If we can think and convey ideas with precision through simple words, then that’s the way to go.  It’s the precision of our language, not the number of syllables, that matters.  And if you can’t explain in meaningful concrete terms what some string of words means, then chances are they mean nothing and you’re being treated like Winston Smith.  That’s Orwellian.


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11 thoughts on “Say What?

  1. Ed.

    SHG: “The point Orwell made was that language needs to satisfy the ability to think and convey specific and nuanced meaning.  This doesn’t mean that it’s somehow more intellectual to use more complicated, prolix or faux sophisticated language when a simple, plain or direct word does the job.  The point of communication is to communicate, not show how many fancy words are in your repertoire.”

    MDiG: “I understand the allusion.  But I believe it to miss the point.”

    Editor’s Note: But I believe it misses the point.

  2. George Wallace

    One of the best bits of advice I ever received came from a lawyer who insisted to me, before I headed off to college, that to be an English major was one of the best undergraduate preparations for the study and practice of Law. I love the shadings, gradations, and intricacies of the English language for their own sakes, but also for the reasons you highlight: their remarkable effectiveness as tools for clearer thought and clearer transmission of thought. Thanks for coming, again, to their defense in this increasingly benighted age.

    It is ironic, and troubling, that the emphasis on the surveillance aspects of ‘1984’, and the separation of the term “Orwellian” from its roots in a concern for the misuse and debasement of language, is itself an Orwellian act.

  3. KSW

    I would disagree with your thought that misunderstanding a book is an Orwellian act. Misunderstanding an author’s purpose; or, perhaps, understanding it not incorrectly but suffering contradiction by a more thoughtful reader with a more nuanced and able explanation; is not Orwellian because it is not an oversimplification of the language nor an attempt to control underlying ideas nor an insistence on how to use language. Instead, it is simply a result of the natural ability of language to grow beyond itself and change over time, which is very nearly the opposite of this meaning of Orwellian. The way the meaning of Orwellian has changed is similar to the way ironic has grown beyond its original technical meaning of the audience knowing something the characters in a plot do not. To insist that Orwellian only be used to convey the idea of thought control or that ironic not be used to mean “happening in the opposite way to what is expected,” is itself Orwellian.

    Thus, this article is presently informative, but if used to insist that the new meaning of Orwellian is not used, becomes a tool for Orwellian acts.

    At the worst, people who use Orwellian incorrectly are guilty of a semantic technicality.

  4. SHG

    No, you don’t get to decide the meaning of Orwellian. Orwell got to decide that. You can use it properly or call it something else. What you cannot do is take a word and make it mean whatever you think it should.

  5. Rebecca

    “The point Orwell made was that language needs to satisfy the ability to think and convey specific and nuanced meaning. This doesn’t mean that it’s somehow more intellectual to use more complicated, prolix or faux sophisticated language when a simple, plain or direct word does the job. The point of communication is to communicate, not show how many fancy words are in your repertoire.”

    Orwell made precisely this point in his wonderful essay “Politics and the English Language.”

  6. SHG

    Keith Lee at  An Associates Mind made the same point, and was kind enough to list Orwell’s 6 Rules:

    As we are on Orwell, I think it’s probably worth re-posting his 6 rules for clear writing from his 1946 essay, Politics and the English Language :

    1. Never use a metaphor, simile or other figure of speech which you are used to seeing in print.
    2. Never use a long word where a short one will do.
    3. If it is possible to cut a word out, always cut it out.
    4. Never use the passive where you can use the active.
    5. Never use a foreign phrase, a scientific word or a jargon word if you can think of an everyday English equivalent.
    6. Break any of these rules sooner than say anything barbarous.

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